All Comments on 'Valley of Sinners Ch. 08'

good piece of writing.

I wish it would have gone on. Your characters came to life in my head. It kind of felt rushed at the end, did you give up? You shouldn't have.

I thought it was agreat story I lived in hendeson as akid and loved the feel of it thanks.

Excellent tale, well strung together.

I suspect this lengthy tale required you to slow down a little - meaning your grammar and spelling was much better.

Keep up the good work - and more Kiwi tales please.

Another bewdy from SW Oz