All Comments on 'Val's Dilemma'

Very Sweet. Luvd this story. Really prompted my imagination.

Not much of an ending, needs a lot of work.

Well written fantasy, loved it was hot

Nice little tale of boy becomes girl, gets girl.

You really missed on some great parts of this type of changeover story. He was too easy with the changes in his life. There is more than exchanging body parts. He needed to change his whole approach to life. You could have chronicled all the changes he needed to go through.

He got the girl too quick. Heck she would have noticed something wrong even if her cunt was in the right place.

Needed to get revenge on guy for raping her. Should have got the pill then really let him have it.

Then in major romantic love scene between the two girls, flushed it down the toilet.

Nice tale, you tell it well, just left a lot on the table.

Tags really wrong. Not transsexual or transgender. Only minor character Justine got that role.

Lovely story :) I would love to become a beautiful girl like Val and be with Casey. We would be a loving couple and maybe even adopt a daughter together 😉 That would be my 💓 dream .. I am only a trans but so much like the warm loving Casey 😍❤️and so comfortably soft and femm .

Who has that Pink Pill? I want one! To hell with the Blue Pill! Goeff was a pig and a thief looking to rape! He should get that pink pill for the injustices and no blue pill to return! I'm glad Val and Casey are together! I did write two submissions today but internet lost my comments! Great job jackie_em!

Great story. Loved to find a pink pill like that. I only wish it were true and not a fantasy. Loved reading it and I don't usually read long stories but this one captivated me from the beginning. Would love to see a follow up to it.