All Comments on 'Vampire Encounter Ch. 07'

by ava23

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Gam_69Gam_694 months ago

Loved the story, though I'm not sure if the story is complete.

I feel the over use of punctuation, is a bit frustrating.

Not sure if you were using Grammarly to help with that, but if not, try using the free version to sort out that pesky over-use of punctuation marks such as ,

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