All Comments on 'Vampires Don't Sparkle Ch. 09'

by maestro84

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KayWyeKayWyeabout 7 years ago
Awesome

At the risk of starting to sound like a broken record, great job dude! Just one issue, the chapters are super short. While I don't begrudge the time spent to do quality work, I do wish there was more quality to enjoy. Ah well. Can't wait for the next installment.

ArgentPenumbraArgentPenumbraabout 7 years ago
Bravo!

A Great story and Oh So Sexy!

I love this new plot-line; it introduces an exciting new twist in the story as our Vampiric Lovers fight to protect themselves and their marriage.

This new plot-line has the potential to extend this story over many more exciting adventures.

Excellent Work!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
ugghhhh

Could definitely gone further with this chapter it ended with me wondering what the heck was happening, not even a cliffhanger just an abrupt end.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Very good my man

this story is quickly become one of my favorite vampires form this site you are very good writer do not let anyone tell you otherwise good job and i can't wait for the next chapter

ReaderReaderficReaderReaderficabout 7 years ago
Omfg

I have been dying for this this is my favorite story on this planet please don't make us wait so long for the chapters to follow

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Have a lot of strange fantasies, just throwing them out there for others to enjoy. Also I know my Grammar isn't perfect and I an constantly trying to improve it. Also to help because the site organizes my stories in a confusing way. Mood slime: to read the series in order it...