by maestro84
I waited for you to continue the series and am certainly glad that I did!
This is all for now, may do more in the future but for now I just wanted to do at least one chapter that talked about their daughter.
I really loved this story it was/is the best erotic story ever!
And I found it a real shame it was over, so glad you did this part so thank you!
If you would continue this line I would love to read it!
Maestro84,
I am glad to see you are continuing this story Arc. I keep coming back to check on this arc to see if you would continue it, I am glad that you are. I was wondering if it was going to be a boy or girl, either way it didn't matter to me. I would like to see this continue and follow along and she how Milly handles her life from here on out, it can get interesting.
Kartus
Thank you, I am glad everyone liked it, this was more or less and 1 and done continuation just to show what happened with the baby, I may do more later but I currently have no plans to continue this story line at the moment, but who knows, things could change.
Hey there Maestro,
Great story arc. It would be excellent for you to continue to discover more about Milly & Arthur and Vlad & Tiff but also how Bill and Tammy's relationship turned out.
As another side note on the grammar, it's not as many errors since the first series, and I commend you for improving. But still enough that you need to look into a grammar editing app.
Best of success to you.
God, I loved this! I’m not big into like, mythical things in literotica. But this just captured me and I just love their relationship. Honestly loved it.
[07.05.23]
Both the original series and this additional chapter were excellent!
11/10!!!!!
One of my most favourite series on this site.
Bit annoyed that autochapter puts this as the second in the series, when I first read this story a few years ago, this legacy chapter confused the crap outta me!
As the commenter below noted, "autochapter" makes this this the chapter to follow the initial chapter and thus, jumps about 24 years into the future. Which brought up an inconsistency in that Emily said she could not get pregnant in the initial chapter; so where did Milly come from? A bit of inconsistency in this chapter, when Milly meets Arthur in the woods she notes ". . . even if his blood type wasn't her favorite. . . . ". Later, she notes "It [his blood] tasted just as good as she imagined if not better." A little distracting detail.
I look forward to reading the intervening chapters.