All Comments on 'Vanessa Gets Worked Ch. 02'

Amazing.

After ch 1, I kind of thought Sean was Chad’s son or stepson maybe. Now I don’t know what to think. But wherever this story goes, I’m hooked. Looking forward to ch 3!

That was a different take on the whole dom/sub story than I’ve really experienced. It wasn’t a super original idea, but the execution was good and I enjoyed it. Please don’t leave us hanging :) would love to read more and see where you take it.

This can easily go into the humor and satire category. The phone conversation and sex was absolutely HILARIOUS. Reminded me of a movie scene where her BF is on phone thinking she is masturbating with him on phone when some other guy she was seeing was having sex, it was utterly hilarious! Kudos to the writer, I'm still laughing, esp. at the following bits -

1. Chad : Cum for me.

Vanessa : Sean makes her cum. "Fuck yes."

2. And the typical question that is mandatory in every literotica story. THIS had me ROFL!

Chad : Tell me who owns you slut?

Vanessa : Sean owns me!

hahahaha!!!

Sooooo damn good, the phone really added to the scene.

Thanks, thedusty1. I appreciate the feedback.