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Click hereEmilia practically squealed. "Attaboy!" Gwen cheered, giving me a slap on the ass.
"Youre such a cutie, I have to tell her you said that!" Emilia said as she hopped onto the bus.
I watched Emilia's tight butt climb the steps ahead of me. As I followed, I felt a sense of pride, along with the pleasant sting of Gwen's slap lingering on my butt.
I had no doubt there'd be an incredible night ahead of us, but I couldn't even begin to imagine where it might lead.
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To be continued...
Thanks for reading! I hope you're enjoying this journey we're following these characters on. Let me know what you liked or didn't, and I'll work on getting the next installment out quickly!
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 2 years agoChapter 4 when?
But should be more direct cuckolding and submission between Vanessa and her man when we see them again. Ch.1 was one of the hottest things i've ever read
Anonymousalmost 3 years agoVery erotic and well-written story. I'm enjoying it very much so far, and hope to see you continue.
The interaction with Gwen and Emilia was fun and a nice way for the protagonist to learn some of the backstory from Julia's party and how it influenced later events with Vanessa and Liam.
One suggestion I'd make is to consider adding a bit of anxiety to the protagonist's perspective at some point in upcoming events. I find the most compelling cuckold stories to have some significant emotional turmoil where the cuckold finds himself experiencing conflicting emotions of erotic excitement and insecurity about being unable to satisfy his love. So far what we're seeing here is mostly one-sided with excitement ruling the day.
If things were to happen at this upcoming party that make the protagonist feel a strong dose of humiliation, and fear that he is at risk of losing Vanessa, that could be the basis for some interesting conversations between the two of them later as they try to work out how each feels. Vanessa tries to figure out how to mix comforting and reassuring the guy she loves, with the impulse to get wild, explore some selfish desires, and tease and torment a guy who finds cuckolding erotic. But finding the right mix and the right timing for each might challenge Vanessa at times.
Look forward to reading more.
Anonymousalmost 3 years agoLol took you long enough. Check your acc like once a month to see if it would ever be updated haha
iameaselalmost 3 years agoHopefully some day you'll like pussy more than cock cuck. Then again probably not, sexual preference is a biological thing and not something you can control. Embrace yourself, you'll have a much more fulfilling life than you will if you continue to live a lie.
