Vanessa's Choice

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She broke the kiss. Her breath was short and I could see her pulse beat in her throat. Her bright tawny eyes, lovely and lively as ever, held mine, but only for a moment. She lowered her gaze and pulled her robe closed. "I'm sorry. I sag now. It must be a disappointment to you. You're as firm as ever."

I lifted her chin until our eyes met again and I opened her robe. I retreated a step and trailed my eyes down her body and back up. Her tits drooped and there were stretch marks on them and on her belly. I stroked her breasts with a light touch, cupped one, and kissed it, first with my lips, then with my tongue.

She was nearly a head taller than me, so I had to pull her down a little to whisper into her ear. "The fact that you've born children only makes you more beautiful to me. Please don't ever say anything negative about yourself. It upsets me." I tongue-kissed her ear and bit the lobe. "You'll always be the sexiest woman I've ever known." Our open mouths met again and I entwined her tongue and sucked it in, holding it, massaging it, while I fondled her derriere.

She broke the kiss and took my hand. "The bedroom is this way."

She closed the door and turned to me. "You look amazing. You've hardly aged a day."

My lips formed a wry grin. "Except for the gray hair and wrinkles you mean."

She shook her head. "That hardly matters. Your eyes are still lively and intelligent and your body is still firm and round in all the right places." She felt my breasts and pinched my nipples through the dress. Her deft fingers found the zipper on the back and pulled it down. The dress peeled away and fell to the floor. The bra followed.

Vanessa stroked my breasts. "Yum." She kissed my nipple and ran one hand to my butt and the other to my leg. She murmured, "Your legs look fabulous in these stockings."

She practically pushed me onto the bed. She picked up my left foot. She unbuckled my shoe and sucked my toes one at a time. Remembering one of her stories about Judith, I unbuckled the other and rubbed her nether lips with my right foot. I could feel her dampness as she moaned and rocked her hips. We switched feet, both of us getting hotter and wetter by the moment.

When she dropped my right foot, I cocked my legs open. "I'm all yours, baby."

Her tongue and fingers brought me to completion in moments. As I lay there, trembling and moaning, I felt her arms around me and her lips on my neck. She murmured, "You taste wonderful. So sweet. So hot. So wet."

I ran my fingers through her hair. "Your turn."

***

Sated, we lay entwined, caressing each other. She said, "How about some champagne?"

"Oh yes. Nothing but champagne will do. Can I borrow a robe?"

Her lips curled in a mischievous grin. "I guess it IS my turn to lend you one."

We sat on the couch in her living room. The large windows gave us a splendid view of the beach and the water beyond. The slanting rays of the sun twinkled on small waves stirred by a gentle sea breeze.

I sighed. "I was so afraid that you would just want to talk and that I'd made a fool of myself dressing sexy."

She laughed. "Well, what do you think now?"

I hugged her and whispered, "Thinking has nothing to do with it, only feeling."

She gazed into my eyes. "Do you still love me, after all these years?"

I nodded. "I can't help myself. You're a special woman."

Her eyes softened. "I feel the same way about you. Have you been seeing anyone in particular?"

I shook my head. "Never. Not before you and sure as hell, not after you."

She stroked my cheek. "Would you like that to change?"

I didn't speak. Our open mouths pressed against each other was all the answer required.

FINIS

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liz33ndliz33ndabout 1 year ago

this is my seconf read of this wonderful story, i enjoyednit just as much this time.

Tequila8meTequila8meabout 2 years ago

Excellent story, very well done. Don’t often read long stories, but this one was entertaining…thx…

MigbirdMigbirdabout 2 years ago

Hi — rather than post as lengthy comment thought I would send as email. By the way, am familiar with the setting for your story, I think, though the actual setting is irrelevant. Had to be somewhere and reads like Gulfport — Hattiesburg, MS. Regardless, liked very much this story and the MCs keeping in mind that I am a near hopeless romantic.

Are the characters interesting? Yes, all of them (especially the women, including Judith and Karen) believable even if some actions are on the edge but that behavior is integral to storyline. Vanessa is a remarkably interesting character in every way and Sue a uniquely perfect compliment (not necessarily a foil; each enhance the other) — the relationship is captivating.

Do you care what happens to them? Very much so; caught up in the storyline in part because of characters you created — linkage between characters and storyline is essential. Especially cared about Vanessa and Sue — of course, they are protagonists/MCs but it is the writing that generates that emotion in the reader.

Do they act in a logical fashion? Logical in sense consistent with character and storyline. No “what the hell is going on there” moments for me.

Are their actions believable? Yes

Is the story properly paced? In many ways a page turner.

Too slow? Nope. Too fast? Nope. Is there too much exposition? Nope — enough to understand actions/behavior and necessary background Too little action? Nope

Did you detect plot holes? Aaron’s action in relation to Judith arguably a bit far fetched including “sending” her to Russia. However, there is sufficient explanation to create believability; after all, she is the villain in this story.

Do the main points of the story get resolved in a logical and believable manner? Yes, though wonder what happened to Vanessa’s children (we know they are adults and manage father’s foundation); what is nature of Vanessa’s relationship to children — no need lengthy exposition, but few lines - maybe after mentioning daughters managing foundation.

Did I manage to avoid the deus ex machina problem? Nothing contrived. Yes, good question in light of Vanessa’s letter asking to see Sue coming after quite a few years and their romantic reunion, but handled well and entirely consistent with the two MCs. When Sue read of Aaron’s death, the reader knows there is more to come, but not entirely sure what. I like the timeline — the two women are older and no need to involve children in reunion, etc.

Does each of the main characters have a unique voice? Yes — you can easily picture them and not simply because of descriptions. Their action/behavior and the dialogue create uniqueness.

Can you imagine them saying the things they say in real life? Definitely

Hope you will continue to share new stories/characters on Literotica. Good luck with your writing adventures.

Migbird

MigbirdMigbirdabout 2 years ago

I commented at the end of several chapters when first posted in installments. Thoroughly enjoyed as a near hopeless romantic. Was torn when Vanessa and Sue parted as Vanessa made her choice to be with Aaron; I guess that I wanted the two protagonists to somehow find a way (and they did in the end). In any case, I sent you an email answering the questions you asked at the outset. Hope that you continue to share your writing talent with other stories/characters.

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