All Comments on 'Vannerbehn's Luck Pt. 08'

I don't know how you keep this improvement going.

This is one of the best stories on this site.

Thank you so much and please continue to entertain us with this great tale.

Well done. Seems you intend to make an honest man of him yet.

a nice twist. Keep up the good work.

I don’t know what your life situation is that let’s you put out quality stories with such frequency, but I’m really glad that you can.

funny

Thank you for creating a female character that isn't willing to just join the que and 'share the love'. Sometimes that's okay in a story, but this speaks more to me as one that doesn't share in reality.

That WAS incredible how Aressine dispatched 2 interlopers so quickly when they broke into their room--and you detailed that fight well to match the moment's hysteria. You quite nearly matched following the pirates around the same way with his street urchins.

Can't say I blame Aressine for how she reacted when she discovered how many females Kelsen bedded, because you framed her as quite shy (hence Pamna telling Kelsen Aressine adored him secretly)--which is why she hoped she would have him exclusively. I know you wrote this story long ago, but I hope you get Aressine and Kelsen together permanently, as I thought you'd keep Pamna around longer (but obviously made her scarce for what reason I cannot fathom). 5

Good for Aressine. That's all I wanted to say.