All Comments on 'Vault 62 Ch. 01'

Good work look forward to future chapters

great start to a good idea

Okay, I stopped halfway down the first page to come write this comment: you're a great writer and I really enjoy your prose but the exaggerated italics are *killing* me. What I initially thought was a satirical style choice based on the source material came way too fast and way to frequently. Reading this sounds like listening to a theatre kid gleefully describe making a sandwich. Please, dial back the italics.

Honestly hope you continue/focus on writing this and it doesn’t get shelved for another 6+ months like you said this chapter did