All Comments on 'Vay-Cay'

Damn I so love this story I had to get myself off to finish it! At least I made it to chapter3 but I had to jack myself I was so hard and turned on. I really wish this was me being trained or taken.

Wow! Very well written! I am so turned on by being submissive! What a sweet journey!

Why do women write gay erotica? You can always tell; it’s always slow moving and never gets hot.

I had to cum twice reading this, the second time I love the natural submissiveness, It's something I understand

Great writing making the reader submerse himself as the visitor and living his life. Would love to have the remainder 2 days there.

This is only Part 1?? Oh, my!

I am so incredibly hard and leaking pre-come all over the place. I fantasize about being taken this way.

Wow I love it what a great story, the seduction, the submission, that wonderful moment when you realise that you need to submit to a real man, I hope the next episode will be here soon. X sissy Lucy

So hot. What a great way to discover the secret of uninhibited sex. We often think great seed is all about the body, but REALLY great sex is all about the mind and how to mindblow it. Looking forward to the next chapter

Great story telling and very hot! Look forward to the continued training with rhe others.

Yes! Can't wait for part 2! So sexy.

Amazing story!!! So exciting, I hated for it to end!

DAMN!!!!!!

Wow!!!! Hard a dripping so many times while reading this. Please don't stop and leave us hanging. I need to see Chapter two and more, maybe once he returns home. You are a good writer, bringing us all along his sensual outing.

Love the story. I'd love to be Jame.

Came back to see if part two is up! So good!

Anxiously waiting for part 2! Well done!

Incredibly erotic, sexy and just plain hot. It’s been a while since you wrote this. Are you still writing? Are you still planning on a second part?

Two things: one, I want this to be me; and two, when will Part 2 be ready?

Damn I wanna get shaved after reading this!!!!

I was bored after the first page - only scanned the second. There were too many errors in the writing - you need to proofread your writings better.

Very hot story! I’m ready for chapter 2. I was rock hard and leaking pre-cum throughout. I found myself lusting after CC and wanting him to shave every inch of my body.

That was so hot and sexy. A true story of what and how someone’s real sexual pleasure is released. The part about getting pleasure out of giving pleasure, offering your body, is so so true. Thank you.

Brilliant

This was a hot story, I would love to be Jame. To be seduced and taught the ways of the gays. However, there were a LOT of writing errors. Sentences that made no sense. Partial sentences where there should have been full sentences. Grammar mistakes. I give it a five for being a hot story, but take two away for all the grammar mistakes, making this a three star story.

Please get someone to proofread your stories.

Really hot story. It had me hard and wanting to suck cock so bad!