All Comments on 'Velvet: A Story of Obedience'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
I'm panting

For goodness sake, don't stop now!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Very good start!

A very good start, erotic and promising. Velvet's yielding to the orders of absolute strangers was a little bit too fast, though. Make the chapters longer.

I'm looking forward to the next chapters.

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