Vengeance

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Seriously? How do you refuse an offer like that? I dropped to my knees, so I was at the same level as he was. No words were necessary. In fact, I'm kind of surprised that we didn't just shed our clothes and get it on right there in the middle of the dance floor. FYI, that happened in the middle of the living room a couple of hours later. Donna gave me the video the next morning.

So, now I am here sitting on the veranda of our house watching Derric and Jerrod playing with my grandchildren. I am interrupted by the chime of my cell phone. It's the number for the daycare that I still own.

"What?" I answered. I was irritated at being disturbed. That's why I hired the best. I hired them so that they took care of things, and that I was not disturbed.

"Uuummm, ma'am?" the voice on the phone stuttered. "I'm really sorry to disturb you, but you really need to come down here. The police will be here shortly, and I have no idea what I will say to them."

"What do you mean that you don't know what to say? Just tell the truth." I answered.

"Well, that's the thing. If I tell the truth, they will lock me up in the psych ward."

"Tina, what the fuck is going on there?" I asked.

"Well, you remember those twins that we recently took on? The ones with those weird gold specs in their eyes?" She began.

"Yeah. OK. I remember them."

"Well, as you know, I was really never comfortable around them. I just felt that there was something wrong with them."

"Seriously, Tina. They are babies. There is nothing that you should be worried about."

"Yeah, I would agree with you except for today."

"What are you talking about?" I asked.

"Ok. So, their mom dropped them off as usual. As usual, they looked at each other and seemed to be communicating. It freaked me out as usual, but I still put them in the common room with the other kids. It was two hours later when all hell broke loose. Six gunmen broke into the center. Of course, we were unarmed, so we had no choice but to obey them. The next thing we knew, they had focused in on the twins. They told us that they were taking the twins, and that we would be unharmed if we let them leave. Obviously, we couldn't just let them leave with the children without putting up a fight. I was just about to push myself into a fight when the weirdest thing happened. I glanced over at the twins, and their eyes were glowing fucking RED! I mean not like red from crying or anything like that, I mean red from the pits of hell red. Suddenly, the gunmen got weird looks on their faces. They walked outside, then dropped their pants and began masturbating with each other. As they were doing that, they emptied their magazines into the air."

"OK." I said. "That seems a bit odd. What do I need to do? I wasn't there, so I probably can't add to anything."

Can you call the twins father and have him come down?"

"Sure." I answered. "What's the father's name and phone number?" I asked.

"His name is Cameron Drake."

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ju8streadingju8streading22 days ago

oh yeah.

got to love some of saddletramps justice providers

AmbulAmbul4 months ago

I really liked the story, even with the name mixups. Who is Cameron Drake? I must have read right by it and his name was not important - until the end. These things did detract a bit and seemed a little sloppy. Otherwise a good story.

WittonWitton5 months ago

Plain awful. Magical thinking posing as a plot

shopratshoprat5 months ago

I agree with EastCoaster1 - too bad about the few oopses and plot breaks (the Jimmy-Jerrod name confusion, also Derrick-Derric, and also tat Derrick remarried 2 years in with a bitch wife that hung up when the MC tried to speak to him when she was released, only to just disappear from the story so Derric could ask her to remarry).

Still, those errors are pretty forgiveable, because it was a great story!

oldmanbill69oldmanbill696 months ago

Great story ! 5 from me.

myassisdraginmyassisdragin6 months ago

Oh this sure leaves an opening for a follow up. Hope you come up with a sequel, I can see several directions..

willyk1212willyk12126 months ago

MAYBE TO MUCH DEBATCERY MAYBE

willyk1212willyk12126 months ago

WHAT HAPPENED TO THE SECOND WIFE

MasterJerryGMasterJerryG6 months ago

Okay this one just has too many holes to even start. I follow you for a reason and this one has wondering why?

inka2222inka22226 months ago

5 stars, but WTF happened to ex-husband's second wife???

/

Also, was there a point to add paranormal children of what seems to be SaddleTrump's character? Sounds like a setup for Ch2 or a sequel, but I don't see any evidence from the author stating that this was chapter 1.

ju8streadingju8streading6 months ago

absolutely great.

loved the ending with the drake twins

EastCoaster1EastCoaster16 months ago

Yes, there were a few 'oops-es'...

...yes, a couple of names morphed into different names for a bit...

...yes, there were a few discordantvtime-shifts...

...and yes, a couple of characters from another author showed up... but you said that was going to happen and even named both the author AND the story !

.

So... who cares ?

It was STILL a Hella story, worth 5 stars !

Yes...

I'm a fan...

LechemanLecheman6 months ago

I did enjoy the inclusion of Cameron's children - that was well done.

I love it when characters from other stories are introduced, in this instance from saddletramp1956 'Flash 01' story.

Nasty56Nasty566 months ago

You should correct the mistake and repost. Good take on the story but needs clean up.

DrtywrdsmithDrtywrdsmith6 months ago

Great story, same issues with the inconsistent points. 4⭐️, would have been five w/o the inconsistency.

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