All Comments on 'Vengeance Gone Wickedly Awry'
by Jimyfoxx
- 9 Comments
Paganmoonover 2 years agoA fun and arousing story, it certainly got my imagination working. In time for the season too!
Anonymousover 2 years agoThe idea isn't bad, but it really takes too long until the two finally get down to business. And the first sex with your own mother must be something really special and deserves to be several pages long. Here it just happens in passing. She wakes up to his screwing and a few lines later it's already over. Too bad, a lot was given away here.
I would continue the story, but much snappier. Introduce the real Mrs. Seong, other ghosts or even other strippers.
Anonymousover 2 years agoIt’s cool your making a follow up to a story u made years ago. I hope this mean you’ll get around to making Fun and Forbidden 2, that one was amazing.
Anonymousover 2 years agoIt’s cool your making a follow up to a story u made years ago. I hope you’ll make a sequel to Fun and Forbidden, that one I reread cause it’s great!
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