All Comments on 'Vengeance'

by aldenbradley

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norcal62norcal62over 12 years ago
Flow of action was interrupted by switching to Friday night.

Having hubby seem to just accept the vid was unexplained and left the story rudderless.

saratusaratuabout 12 years ago
Just another,,,,,

creampie wimp story. It is to bad that so many seem to think this kind of thing makes a good story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
hot action

loved it and so did my man just wish you hadden jumped it at the end think she shopuld have done him afew time and have him plant his seed in her deep. telling her man only after it has taken in her. he did it a few time she should get the same. who knows if he had put one in the girl from the pool. let him face the facts she's a hottie. thaats what my mate said would make it all the better for him to face. lets have the next parts to it making him her wimppy boy

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Yuck.

Double Yuck!

Why bother being married?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
I think...I'm gonna be....SICK!

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
You're kidding right?

Start with the cliche's. 1 - Revenge is a dish best served cold. She served it HOT! Mistake one. 2 - Men have fragile ego's. She just crushed his and SHOWED him.

Mistake two. 3 - Two wrongs don't make a right. And now she wants to add to the wrongs by rubbing his face in it? Mistake three. Strike three and she's out! No matter who started it. This marriage is toast. And if we believe Steve, he wouldn't have anything to do with this little group. Not worth an angry husband coming after him right? And by now, this would be a very angry husband, looking to file for divorce against a slut wife and just maybe looking to put good old Steve in the hospital.

LickideesplitLickideesplitabout 11 years ago
Surprise ending

So Sweetie turns out to be a TLW (with side benefits!). It is good to see that she learned to appreciate Hubby's claim that it was 'just sex!'

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
First off the marriage is done

Secondly, since her revenge was so over the top (unbelievable too) it's time to pack. Since you have the video evidence, the divorce will be a slam dunk. This whole story was too much like every other story around. Poor effort.

Slv2phoseSlv2phoseover 10 years ago
Quite nice

I love how people comment on the realism of the story. It's fiction. Treat it as such. Nobody watches porn for the story and how real it is. They watch to see sex. We read erotica to read about sex. There was sex in the story and it was explained good enough. Talking about the marriage, how the guy should react, their feelings? Just read, get hard, jerk off if you want. Then move on the the next story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
if you kill yourself now

Then we can find a real writer to do a story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Well that was idiotic behavior

First off the standard cliche - two wrongs don't make a right. Then the reply - don't get even, get ahead. But her behavior is dumb. She believed him when he said he was clean? So in order to get revenge, she's willing to risk her life on the word of a complete stranger. You can't divorce aids or herpes. Then his reaction. He cheated. She got serious over the top revenge. This marriage is over. And he has all the evidence he needs to get a good split of their assets. Maybe not evidence for Court. But when he tells her he'll send copies to her family, friends and work friends, he'll get what he wants. What a stupid woman. For implausible, ridiculous behavior for all involved and taking into account this is a fictional story, I still gave you a "1".

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Great story

So very hot. Love that you blew him and fucked him without a rubber. I've only cheated on my hubby twice and the second time, sans condom, was so much better. Lovely. Hot.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
DUMB & DUMBER

enough said ... ONE STAR

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
PUTRID VOMIT, HAVE A CAN OF IT SICK FAGGOT !!!

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
some of us love your stories and want more so we can see dear annony's head explode

Gave you a 5 for your effort. Keep writing while annony looks for his wife!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
A common response to cheating within a marriage

But all this did was put paid to the divorce. She has a video of her cheating. Which means HE has a video of her cheating. She has no proof of his affair. Time to throw the bitch out, employing the double standard of what's good for the goose isn't good for the gander, and keep a larger portion of the marital assets. One look at the video should have told Mike that Steve was better in bed, better looking and had a bigger cock than he did. No man survives that blow to his ego. This was a train wreck looking to happen. Mike was an idiot. LeighAnn was a whore.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
ya right

What a stupid story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Alden bradley

Cum guzzling Brit.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Oi Moron

Read the Bio, that's if you can read you stupid fucker it says location Tennessee

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
yeah but

He writes like british authors as in

HERE IS MY WIFE

TAKE HER

I LOVE IT

CAN I WATCH?

LET ME PUT IT IN!

OH PLEASE LET ME RUB MY NOSE IN HER CUM FILLED PANTIES

REALLY AND TRULY I CAN LICK HIS SEED OFF THEM

YOU ARE THE BEST WIFE

Hey I loved it. Truth is more than one married female has asked me to fuck her and I have. Fact is word has gotten round cheating wives like to brag to girlfriends

I have just one rule. I do not chase or seduce or charm them. I have never gone looking for affair with married female.

The rule is if they want me they have to come up to me and straight out ask me to fuck them.

Like I wrote...they love to talk about me. From my questioning of them afterwards they start by gushing about my lips and tongue on their clit and then get to the THICNESS OF MY HUGE COCK

Not sure which seals the deal hope it is talented tongue. Cannot take credit for cock size but even if mine was smaller than average the oral ministrations would keep them coming back for more

OR IS THAT CUMING AND CUMING MORE AND MORE

ANYWAY THANK YOU FOOLISH HUSBANDS OUT THERE

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Boy was THAT stupid.

He has what he needs. His wife on video committing adultery. File for a divorce and use the video to keep the lion's share of the marital assets. Then send the video to all her family and friends. All done with one of the dumber stories I've read.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Thanks for the video of you fucking around on me!

Now I can divorce you and since our state allows adultry as a reason for divorce, I get everything, lmao!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Nope

Bull shit, hubby got everything on tape so there is only one outcome. Wifey seen as a stupid slut and having to leave town, see you later cum dump.

tazz317tazz317almost 6 years ago
1 CHEATER, 2 CHEATER, 3 CHEATER 4

all join together for a rousing encore. TK U MLJ LV NV

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Bullshit.

I think he takes the tape and leaves. What he did wasn't premeditated. What she did was calculating and cold blooded. I think he takes the tape to a divorce attorney and then makes sure ALL her family, friends and acquaintances see it. Worst case scenario he gets half of everything and moves on. She gets ruined as the whore she is. After all, she has no proof of his infidelity and he has a tape of hers. Their marriage is toast and everyone KNOWS she's a cheating slut. End of story.

26thNC26thNCover 5 years ago
No

Stupid story. No new ground here.

lingerie65lingerie65over 5 years ago
I'll have my fun also

I really enjoyed the story, it was well written and thought about. (And oh so sexy)

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

scum story I wood sell her ass to the lowest whore house I could find andlet her fuck all she wants,.............

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
A good recocilliation story

Sauce for the goose and gander.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Phew!

Hold your nose if you read this one.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago

and why would he watch it and when he did why is he still with the whore time to grow some balls and go

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Worst bullshit I've read

On this site in a long time.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
The husband lied about having an affair

He is a cuckold. There is no way he had sex with another woman. He knows he is inadequate as a man. The wife has now proven other men provide her more much pleasure. Married pity sex, if the wife's bull permits it, is the only type of intimate contact in this poor loser's future.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Total bullshit and the end of the marriage

26thNC26thNCabout 2 years ago

LW whores always take revenge too far.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Hilarious piece of shit story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Lemons and lemonade??

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