All Comments on 'Venus in an Indian Summer'

Well written, quite hot and bittersweet.

I very much enjoyed the Roman mythological and Renaissance metaphors as well.

Nice.

... but a bit sad. Gosh!

I expected a typical may/december lesbian story, but the emotions you tied to it made it so much more! Kudos on a work of sweet art.

~as I sit drinking a very sweet red wine, I toast you and your Venus. Thank you for sharing your writing talents.

It takes a lot of guts to grow old. It's not for the young.

Thank you for this wistfully beautiful story. As a middle-aged bi woman who has treasured memories of loving encounters with younger woman, I will keep this story in a special place close to my heart.

Thank you very much. I have several "sort of" ready, or close enough to show I think, but I don't know how to send them. I'm writing what I hope is a novella, stored on this phone (12 chapters) and another long story which I plan to dovetail into the first one (10 chapters) I have other ones on my literotica writers page, set in 2123.. Anyway, I can send something to your email address, IF you'd like to look at it and give me your opinion? My writing style is suited more for looonnnggg stories! About this story of yours, this is just me, but FOR me it got to the sex too fast. When she first came into the house and began complimenting her? I'd have done SOMETHING to extend it, add a little uncertainty and/or suspense, add a wrinkle or two. etc. At first I thought it was a roleplay, and you were going to hand it to me and I could pick it up from the 19-year-olds point of view. How did Nicole know Lizzie was lesbian by the way? I personally like it, say, when one party or the other is a novice, and/or surprised. Sorry if I sound overly critical. I appreciate you sending it very very much! Btw, WOULD you like to co-write a story? You take it to a point, then I write, then you, until you end it? Just a thought.

Thank you very much. I have several "sort of" ready, or close enough to show I think, but I don't know how to send them. I'm writing what I hope is a novella, stored on this phone (12 chapters) and another long story which I plan to dovetail into the first one (10 chapters) I have other ones on my literotica writers page, set in 2123.. Anyway, I can send something to your email address, IF you'd like to look at it and give me your opinion? My writing style is suited more for looonnnggg stories! About this story of yours, this is just me, but FOR me it got to the sex too fast. When she first came into the house and began complimenting her? I'd have done SOMETHING to extend it, add a little uncertainty and/or suspense, add a wrinkle or two. etc. At first I thought it was a roleplay, and you were going to hand it to me and I could pick it up from the 19-year-olds point of view. How did Nicole know Lizzie was lesbian by the way? I personally like it, say, when one party or the other is a novice, and/or surprised. Sorry if I sound overly critical. I appreciate you sending it very very much! Btw, WOULD you like to co-write a story? You take it to a point, then I write, then you, until you end it? Just a thought.