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bhill8671almost 6 years agoDumb place to stop
You just leave it there in the middle with no resolution, no reason to look forward to another chapter. Dumb! I for one will not be back.
chytownalmost 6 years agoYou Had A 5 Coming***
Then you fell asleep and stop writing!! It was very entertaining until you stopped cold!!!!!
Anonymousalmost 6 years agoEnjoyed it
Reads a little like Tim Winton. Not quite Literotica's speed but I loved this.
Anonymousalmost 6 years agoAnother
Another run ofvthecmill story with a nothing ending.How can people say they enjoy reading this rubbish
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