by ROBERTODAVO
Another run ofvthecmill story with a nothing ending.How can people say they enjoy reading this rubbish
Reads a little like Tim Winton. Not quite Literotica's speed but I loved this.
Then you fell asleep and stop writing!! It was very entertaining until you stopped cold!!!!!
You just leave it there in the middle with no resolution, no reason to look forward to another chapter. Dumb! I for one will not be back.