All Comments on 'Veronica in China'

If he does he is STUPID

be offensive, a room full of chinamen has not been used in since the turn of the last century. They are Chinese.

Great story, can't wait for more

Nice slow build-up. Of couse the sex would have been more believable if Veronica performed out of a sense of duty rather than loving it.

Chinese people are not called Chinamen or chinks. The story was highly offensive to chinese people in general. Thanks for showing your ignorance.

She was used for what God intended. To be fucked and filled with cum in every hole.

The problem with americans is that they are all worried about racism. I'm chinese and i'm racist deal with it. It was a good story and I can appreciate good work. The fact you're in here reading erotic texts already denies you the right to give intelligent comments. Racists indeed. You the man/woman veronica. Don't let these geeks spoil your day.

You guys are wound up way too tight...relax, it's a seedy erotic story about a reluctant gangbang sex!

Also It could have been way way more offensive then this if the author really wanted.

Ok 1st all chinks n spics have lil embarassing dicks, so how is it possible 4 her to feel let alone enjoy 1 chink, i mean 40+ of those lil dick closed eyed fuckers i mean be realistic. Now if they were black or even white that would be better.

Do consider writing more? It is rare to read stories of sexy white women being lusted and used by Asian men! Had you thought of bukkate?

Chinese but also American. All a gangbang reminds me of are BBPs.

BBPs ? What's that ?