All Comments on 'Very Rebellious Girl'

Well, a very good beginning. It ended without any real ending though. The story could have continued with him paddling her until she makes a miscount. After bringing it to her attention, they start over. Of course, after beating her about 50 times he provides a little bit of aftercare as he wipes her tears away. There are so many options to continue the story line. Please provide more chapters.

Switching between the tenses is a bit confusing, maybe you can edit that.