All Comments on 'Vestige'

A very nice warm story and a caring wife . The one thing I don't see as practical in a lot of these stories is when a girl says "Take me" . I have fucked a lot of young ladies in my youth and never once heard those words .

I usually love your stories, but this one wasn't very believable. Sorry, just being honest.

lovingly rendered. If incest was always like this, it would be required and not taboo. Good work!

Who's Shelly?

This introduction to your story has me looking forward to enjoying more of them..Your skills as a writer have been blessed..Of all the submissions ive read on this web site, This is probably the 3rd or 4th reply that have not suggested ideas to enhance the story/plot. TKS 4 the EXCELLENT STORY (l4P)

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Times have changed. The law seems determined to press for no sex of any kind before 18, no nude anything before 18, even the imaginary girl in a sexy story must state she is 18, even if she only came into existence a few months ago on paper and won't really be 18 for another 18 years. Lawmakers are so used to fabricating to each other that their own real essence seems a bit foggy.

Further, ultra consecutive politics demand (I think) that only the parents can be allowed to teach their offspring anything about sex. And this can only be done after 18. I think your story is right on in this regard. Except then it's incest(?) well not really, as this should be the girl's second or more father, not her blood father or even her adapted father. Perhaps the law is no longer tolerates marriages that can make it without a lawyer. In order to meet contemporary political requirements however, the mother is now required to teach the daughter all about how to be a lesbian, should that be the route she might choose. Perhaps you can pick this literary requirement up in a new next chapter.