All Comments on 'Vicious'

The ending is ridiculous, a lender can’t just walk up, and demand payment anytime they feel like it. I realize you want to burn all of them but find something a little more believable. Thanks for the time and effort. KS

CINCO ESTRELLAS!

Cinco estrellas too.

Well done first part.

The highlights for me

were his youth and the wonderful Miss Kitty.

Well done chymera.

Sometimes “getting even” can warm the heart and make one smile. 5*s. Thanks for sharing.

Now that's how to burn a birch and associates 5* I loved it.

Great story! Thank you and it right up my alley. Too many shitty, shit stories on this site. Worthy of 5 BIG ASS FUCKING HUGE LAMING NOVA STARS!

Super story!

well done story

I always evaluate these stories, based on one thing. Did the characters act in their best interests?

Wifey- Well... Most women think about trading up, during their life time. But most affluent men who will consider cheating with a married woman, do not want to take in the baggage of marrying her, and co-habitating with her kids. So, the rich boyfriend taking her away, didn’t make sense at first. Then it comes out he is almost broke, and they believe they will be able to steal enough valuable artifacts to fund their lives. So I give both of their reactions a definite “ maybe”.

Husbands reaction. When you get a cancer, you either let it kill you, or you kill it. Contrary to what you read on Lit, RAAC is not a viable action, when your wife has proclaimed she doesn’t love or respect you. I gave this story a 5 so far. Let’s see what chapter 2 brings....

Could have done without the long winded life story now you have me curious on what part 2 is about cause this 1 ended The way it should have the a way man would have ended it though I would have killed them

A very uneven story. Lots of time spent educating readers on who Ryan is and why he is as he is. Then he gets married….and since this is LW, wife cheats. But you robbed readers of any catharsis by completely avoiding any interaction between him and Dot before, during, or after the divorce. Instead, we get a trite bit of prose where he lines up all his ducks to get revenge. And even then, tne big delivery of it fell real flat.

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This could have been so much better.

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3 ***

Sharing the STD around among Dot's friends was almost sadistic, but satisfying as it was one burn I hadn't heard before.

Definitely "FIVE BIG NOVA STARS"

DOT and her asshole friends & new husband are getting theirs...

Not going to vote for this as it should be in the non-erotica category.

for BTB... this was touching and the pain deserved. looking forward to the sequels.

Love ir. When the snobs get fucked over it earms my heart.

One of the best stories on here

Good story 5*****

Beat revenge on these loelife bast

rds I've ever read about.

4 stars and one of your better stories.

Sweet! Got them all. 5 🌟 burn 🔥 🔥 🔥 🔥 🔥

I would have preferred the bear style BTB (I reserve my "good person" side, compassion and empathy only for people who deserve to be treated well; and my wolverine side for people who deserve that). But I guess he did enough damage to leave me happy; at least sufficiently so for 5 stars :P

Great story......love it.

Enjoyed this one but wondering why there two more. it ended well unless the other two are romance or something else

Very good story. Miss Kitty was a Saint and the MC savior.

In the end the kid turned into a good man.

Score the TD and field goal for Miss 😺

A little, ok, a lot more BTB would have made the story even better. Would have loved to see the bear totally unleashed, not tamed down by his real friends

Glad to see that he got the police on the two connivers who stole his antiques and the bitch who stabbed him in the back and destroyed their marriage. Very good story, chymera, thanks for sharing.

Classy, instructive story; very well played.

Thank you 5+

loved it, great story and he really turned out OK in the end. They really, really dodged a bullet on this one. Be very careful who you think your better than it might just bite you in the ass.

Better way to be is to treat everyone the same until their actions make it better or worse. No need to judge at first contact. And always trust but verify, unchecked trust is earned not given. Once lost it is gone forever.

I love the story. This is the second time that I have read it. This story line could easily lead to a complete novel. I think it would have been nice if he realized that he was the "mark" in this situation.

Nice little plot, feels as if you rushed the ending but I see there is a part 2.

Nice BTB

Great story loved it

5/5

Dot was one really stupid bitch. His revenge was sweet. Great story., sort of an underdog coming out on top.

Interesting. Thank you for referencing this. Reminded me of what is going on.

This story was one of the most entertaining and inspiring of all the revenge stories that didn’t get into murder. This is definitely one of a couple of go to stories when I am depressed and need to laugh or just cheer up a bit. Thank you so much for writing and posting it, I appreciate it greatly.

GG

Dot and friends were very shallow concieted assholes. I was glad to see him get the revenge heneeded and the phony friends deserved.

Nice, but ending seemed rushed. Would have enjoyed a bit more showing more humiliation on ex-wife and Asshole.

Excellent revenge story with an upbeat ending. Thanks!