All Comments on 'Vicky's Experience at the Surgery'

I thoroughly enjoyed 'Vicky's experience'. Great first submission to Literotica.

Looking forward to the next part.....

Will Vicky bump into her nurse again, or will some other woman attract her attention?

Certainly going to enjoy Vicky exploring her lesbian side as you continue this series.

Just the way I like it...

for your first story it is not bad, hope part 2 does not take too long to come out

Good start for your first story, don't be too long with part 2.

I'm curious to find out what is coming next...

Great story but please read the draft before submitting the spelling and grammatical errors do make it harder reading. Regardless as a first story I give 5 stars look forward to the second installment

A big chunk of the story is Vicky and the nurse talking to each other. If the conversation takes longer than a sentence to summarize, it should be written as dialogue.