All Comments on 'Victoria Ch. 01'

Being continuously stimulated all night, he got hardly any sleep. He dragged his ass into work in the morning, and was nodding off during the morning staff meeting. His boss repremanded him, and told him if he was going to be useless all day, he might as well go home. While driving home he totally missed seeing a stop sign and got T-boned by another car. He was released from the ER later in the day. He went home, packed all his suitcases and hit the road. He left a note and his ring on the kitchen counter, along with the ER follow-up instructions that said he should get more sleep.

Good premise.

But too rushed.

And certainly she could have teased/played with his cock and balls while he was eating her pussy.

Needed more details of the pussy eating and the asshole licking. With isntructions/directions as to exactly what she wanted him to do to her.

And needed dialog during the pussy/asshole tonguing where she told him how good it felt. And was he enjoying giving her so much pleasure?

Three stars.