All Comments on 'Victoria Pt. 05: The Gift of Lilith'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Keep is going, or coming

Another good part to a very enjoyable series. (Though I still think the first one is the best.)

I truly hope you continue on with it.

But if you don't, then at least it ended at a decent 'stopping point'.

JDDRIVERJDDRIVERover 6 years ago

Really like this story line. Hope there many more chapters!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Great story

Great story hope for a next chapter

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Yay

You are back I hope it will be more

Dont_miss_meDont_miss_meover 6 years ago
Great twist...

On the succubus. Couple of spelling and grammar errors, but well done none the less.

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Have a lot of strange fantasies, just throwing them out there for others to enjoy. Also I know my Grammar isn't perfect and I an constantly trying to improve it. Also to help because the site organizes my stories in a confusing way. Mood slime: to read the series in order it...

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