All Comments on 'Victor's New Slave Ch. 05'

Wonderful story! i do hope there is more on its way!

Don't get sentimental. Still a lovely story though.

More more more! Loved the stories,i want to be the slave!!!

the story has been so very hot hope there is more to cumm very much enjoyed master sharing her so she knows her place. so wish i was the slave.

This story was way above the expectations that I have for this site. The character development and the place setting were incredible. The plot moved me on so many levels. Watching their journey from property/owner to lovers was unexpected, touching, sexy, romantic, and just so well written. Plus I think I came about a dozen times :D

Don't stop here, write more, either with this story or others.

daisy

This is the best erotic series I have ever read! A true classic. I actually find myself concerned and invested in these characters. You should be very proud of your work here. Well done!!!!!!!!

i liked the ending best of all

In this one he make up for all his friend did to her .When reading it you could tell he didnt like how john was treating her and this chapter he maked her know he cared also not just used her like john did.

You mentioned in this story how her Father and previous owners had used her prior to Victor. It would be interesting to read about these actions. How did she become a slave to start with? What other ways is she used by Victor? How about that orgy in the dungeon? How about a story about Slave and the chef's assistant?

The perfect master for a submissive! Commanding, yet sensual; in charge, yet yielding. Sounds like my master! Excellent story, author!:)

Loooovvveeee it!!!!!!!!!!!!