All Comments on 'Video Vengeance'

The humor was pretty good, but still a bit raw. I think you'll get better

Once again another hit......thanks SS06

love the humor. i thought i was reading an HDK story.

Very good! Quick, precise, very well-written. It's got all the SS06 elements: girl in love with man (who loves her, and his Mustang), but her stupidity leads her to cheat on him; he 'hits the road,' she tries to get him back, she ends up losing. One wonders what his true reaction would have been had she come down the stairs. Then again, maybe his observation to her tells that story, too. Very funny.

weak!

very different story and short from ss06 but truly enjoyable

about slut and wimp- 1*

Still laughing!! Thanks for sharing.

What a heap of shit!

Not the best of all, weak.

not your usual standard. good but needed work.

Talk about "Jumping" to conculsions!

The Norweigan sailor got the besccvect of this woman insofar as I'm concerned. Nice to count Stang ' back as active author again.Hopefully this effort was a slumpbuster acting as a prelude to a return to the quality standard that the author has accustomed us to in the past.

But lacking on the creativity side

are unable to fly, TK U MLJ LV NV

Right?

Thanks Stang, sad and foolish but once in awhile - a quicky.

Revenge will bite you in the butt...the lesson learned. But that ending was horrible.

Lord Sd: SS06 has been posting all the while on SOL. From some of his comments, it appears that LIT does not consider all of his stories postworthy. I disagree.

I am still laughing over the last sentence.

shit

Normally I really like your stuff, but this one was kind of a disappointment. I'm still looking forward to the next one though.

I would have changed one thing though. She should have taken the bat and destroyed the high intensity fog lights. That could have been her last act for the good of mankind. The new bright lights blind other drivers. It is supposed to be a common courtesy not to do that. Anyone who does deserves to have their car fucked up and their ass beaten. That happened here a couple of weeks ago. Eventually they will blind the wrong person and road rage will take over. If you can't see in the dark with normal headlights....don't drive. Rant over.

(point one)you have pretty much exausted every way to completely destroy a woman

(point 2)your male leading characters are all soo white washed that the concept is surpassing the boring range.

She is a great "villain". She stays completely self focused throughout the whole story. What a great smash ending!

At least it was short.

Thought she needed to grow up and yet she didn't really get any punishment at all.

I realize this was tongue-in-cheek, but it was still a little hard to take. Still, very well-written...loved the ending

"flash bulbs"? something to be said for pausing before one gets ona ledge.

Short story, to the point, great twist, and plenty of humor as usual. The only technical point I would make is that internal quotes (aka single quotes) in her narrative would made the story flow a bit smoother.

I *am* curious, though. One commenter thought that the missing weeks were because Lit found your stories wanting. I got the impression that you just preferred SOL because of the anonymous trolls lurking on Lit. Since my budget doesn't include a payment to SOL, I urge you to reconsider if it's the latter. We all know the trolls are mentally and morally impaired.

Thanks again for another great submission.

Cheers,

Wulf

Just cannot seem find intelligent cheaters and intelligent cuckolds. Maybe those are just oxymorons. But because they are both dumb, their actions are too predictable. Someday someone will figure it o ut.

No payment required. It wasn't for me. I did like the story. Those bright lights really piss me off when the owner is not intelligent enough to use them though. :)

I thought that they were becoming a little tired and stale. Some of the main characters always seem to get mangled or killed in most of his stories. I kind of enjoyed this one though.

MissouriUSA

SS06 publishes all stories on SOL storiesonline.net as SW_MO_Hermit does. My favorit SS06 story is only on SOL "Iraq, I run". So he pubished some stories on SOL when you do not read it on Lit.

cpte has recently published an excellent story on SOL and we could not read it on Lit. I suggest to you join SOL and you can read more good stories either Lit or SOL.

You have been one of my favorite authors. I have enjoyed all of your stories but this one. This was just bad. Sorry but it sucked.

For all you poser out there using a popular Lit author to advertise another site fuck off. I know what google is ok. I'm not an author or some critic telling you that your spelling is off. I just like to read, as usual Stang you didn't fail to entertain me. I enjoyed your writings for awhile now, keep up your good work you got fans out here,

Well written but there was something missing this time. Just a little too unbelievable for me. Keep posting however. I normally can't wait for another of your stories.

fast moving but not your best. you get a 4. and any woman who will do a vengance fuck, no matter what the reason, is not one you ever want to stay with.

Read this story as a warning! Make sure of the facts before you do ANYTHING that might backfire.

Well written and funny. thanks.

If this girl talks the story she survived the fall. Next chapter is in the hospital.

Certainly different.

and you are going to finish this when?

Too, too funny -

Almost serious throughout then the perfect ending -

Now if she actually survived (you can from 9 stories by the way) then a sequel could be fun she is a bit of a moron. I was assuming it was her speaking "from the beyond" or some such heh.

I second the moral - KNOWING something is very different from actually knowing the truth and having all the facts, so many people KNOW what is true because they KNOW it not because all the facts bear it out -

We have an awesome justice system it requires proof beyond a reasonable doubt so a lot of guilty people go free but most innocent ones are saved that way - much better than just KNOWING - I think.

another 'stoopid' woman and her holier than the saints spouse story with the punchline from a blonde-joke.

Man I have seen you do better, really.

Now that's what I call a "burn the bitch" story.

seriously

finsh the story

if you wanna 5 stars

the woman is dead, boneheads, there ain't no more.

But this was actually a fun story to read... I knew she was going to fall, but thanks for not killing her!

no way i would have taken her back... Worthless slut jumped the gun and didn't talk to him or confirm it was him then cheated with another guy.

she doesn't deserve a second chance. she can become a street hoe after the video many people would fuck her.

are real big on Cliches . TK U MLJ LV NV

If the female species would stop using emotion to guide their every decision then this would never have happened. But it also shows if she got mad at him again she would screw somebody else. Once a slut always a slut. I am sure she already denied sex when she got upset with any thing he did. Shows her character all the way. never take back a slut

SS06, congrats on a cleverly obvious story about oblivious characters. Very enjoyable. I would have had it end with her landing on the Mustang but I am a cruel, cruel man.

As for the annoying anonymousie commentators, just remember they are posting from their prison cells between putting out for their cell-block gang. They are in prison for allowing their testosterone & steroid induced hormonal rages to brutalize who ever had the misfortune to be a: smaller and b: in range of their manly fists.

As for Tavadelphin's comment that, quote: We have an awesome justice system it requires proof beyond a reasonable doubt so a lot of guilty people go free but most innocent ones are saved that way :unquote.

ahem: HAHAHAHAH!!! Whowhee what a load crap that boy has been smoking!

Now, when innocent people are convicted based on evidence and testimony presented, what value does the system place on 'innocence'? The Grand Jury system is a crock of shit, whenever they find for the defendant, the DA, looking forward to that next election, will invariably overrule them.

Of course, she jumped the gun, didn't think, didn't confront Benny and subsequently displayed her lesser intellect, her lack of trust and he willingness to react without considering the consequences so...

Too bad, educated, four years of college, supposedly intelligent, good looking and no common sense or confidence. Two wrongs - Nope!

Bye sweety, the bar crowd will miss you!

thanks Stang!

I hoped she would have done a back-flip on the way down! Read the translation to English of the Rammstein song Spring;)

Funny.

The first HOLY SHIT was Stang writing a RAAC tale. The second, and way better HOLY SHIT was the surprise twist ending that ranks right up there with one of JPB's twist endings! That's a compliment, btw!

5 Stars for the HOLY SHIT laughs!

like before you decide to leap in, TK U MLJ LV NV

The last sentence/statement made the whole story. That was way too funny!!

Thanks for making my day. 5 stars just for that.

WiEIRD LOL but good

......bill

Some people are TSTL. Too Stupid To Live...If she really had no intention of killing herself, she should have tied herself to the building , she'd have STILL made the news and he MIGHT have realized how serious she was... And he still might have forgiven her, or at least been willing to TRY to...

But since she was too stupid to confront him BEFORE doing something as stupid as revenge she definitely deserved some negative reaction.

The whoring cunt ended up dead. Good!!

There are plenty of loving wives where if the woman even looks at another man the majority male response is to burn the bitch and such. If a guy 'knew' his wife was cheating there would whines/rants of how he's a wimp for not immediately divorcing her, fucking her friends, and/or torturing her.

he was willing to try to work it out with a two dollar whore cheater. He should have left her.

no ability to fly. TK U MLJ LV NV

This has to be one of your most boring stories, not to mention stupid as well. I have read a lot of your stories and for the life of me don't understand what you were thinking about with this one. It sure doesn't measure up to some of your other stories sorry man but, never mind. The rest of your other stories that I read allows you some amnesty. But this one was miserable.

I laughed so hard I think I pissed my pants. Bout time the damn woman gets what is due her. She couldn't think straight and that just messed her up. Great, I love this story. Thanks

Sad, but a little humorous if you are into dark humor.

That is the best story you've ever written! I laughed my ass off at the stupid self-righteous slut and the fall never hurts...Just the stop at the end! ROTFLMAO!

If I was Benny ringing her up. I would've said jump and as I watch her doing so. As most dumb and stupid people do in marriages and relationships. They always jump into conclusions instead of finding the truth if they investergate at least they'll have a 50/50 chance of saving their marriages or relationships instead of breakups and divorces

"Take the stairs"! Oh my.

She-it man! This story is not finished! So she cheated fuck me she didn't have to die! Come on Guys this is so morbid! Story is good but not great! Love you all! GREG OH 70 % OF READING ENJOYMENT BYE.

now that is a funny story

Loved the last line.

It was good but needs a part 2

THAT WAS FUNNEEEEEE. "I'll be right down. WHUMP!!"

Can we watch that on 'Video Tube'?

Definitely worthy of 5 stars.

You know how to write a story and how to end one.

That was a classic ending is all I can say. Signed: BTW

Oh, Ouch!

I am sure that this is a Blonde Joke .. Right ?

a tale from the twilight zone

😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣

Hilarious!!!!!!!

He said come down. He didn't say how to get there. Great story.

Just hilarious.🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂

Loved the ending.

We get humor from StangStar???? Well done sir.

LMAO!!!!

Ouch! Poor Nat.

That ending actually sucked worse than some of the other ones.

The reconciliation ruined the story. Benny is a dumbass for showing up and forgiving her.

Reconciling cuckolds usually get 1 star because zero is not a score.

2 stars because even though it ended up being an accident the psycho slut did kill herself and that is the only way for a cheating woman to make it up to the man she claims to love

3. A humorous story but while I love reconciliation endings this one I didn't enjoy. The fiance just was mental.

Didn't realise SS wrote willing cuckold loser stories. -5*

Typical "bait and switch" Stangstar06 ending

What a fun ending!

Loved it.

Bill S.

Maybe Benny was just saying that stuff to get her off the ledge.

The ending didn't work. He'd never say that given the seriousness of the situation.

cuck

Author ... if you are going to have someone edit your story for you, at least find someone who has been to high school.

Having the idiot apparently ready to take her back in the circumstances overrode the cute last line about taking the stairs. 2 stars.

Cute

Ew.