All Comments on 'VIP Room'

I hope you keep writing. You can add on to this storyline. I would like to read other stories you might have.

My girlfriend is a waitress and she told me that while she was working a late night, a group of guys came in for dinner and obviously a little more. She told me that they all, 14 well fit and hung guys 25-30 years old. I was shocked when she told me what happend. She told me that the guys were so big that when they slid into her little cunt, she came instantly multiple times. I know it sounds horrible but I was oddly turned on and now I have groups of big dicked men handle my girl. I love to watch and jerk my dick off

Good, but confusing. The language is a little vague, so it's unclear what's happening when. In other words, clarify clarify clarify! Don't use it, try using she, or they.

Also, details! If this is a mind control story, go more in depth with the actual hypnotism. And what is the waitress feeling? Sure, she wants to make everyone cum (which is a little sexist of you, honestly), but what does being ganbanged feel like to her?

Lucky little slut! I'd love to be turned into a group of men's little slut!

So hot to know your there just to pleasure everyone else!

Kisses,Wendy