All Comments on 'Virgin Lauren Loves Brian'

A reasonably good story. A backround, etc. Not as much focus on the sexual aspect as I'd like though.

Thanks for the feedback!

barnabus

Boring hated it don't quit your day job

One of my favorites. Thanks for posting a more realistic story!

Very excellent! You're a great writer and this was a great story. Thanks for sharing this with us.

Good introduction and build up to the story. However, a pitty that it came across as a bit rushed after that.