All Comments on 'Virgin, Slave, Nanny, Lover Pt. 01'

Really different and quite interesting. I liked the fact that it wasn’t overly sexual. It was degrading of course due to the plot but on here I’ve read worse. Your story has a great beginning. It does need another chapter (if that is what you intend; it would be the most prudent choice). Your rating would increase if ppl see there is another chapter to fully complete your story. I would be remiss if I did not mention that the only issue with this story is the constant use of delineation between the “inmates/slaves. It was a bit confusing which designation was for which lady. Otherwise, a good story and I commend you on your choice of plots (plot twist with BF). Thank you for sharing and good luck!

Great first chapter. Looking forward to the next installment. I reread it twice and couldn’t figure out where the brand ended up. Please continue.

Hi Clairissa - part 2 should be available tomorrow and the degradation mostly ends as she has been bought by someone who wants her to be a nanny; she will be treated well.

The story outline has 11 parts ending in happily ever after - I'll email you the chapter headings, part 3 is mostly written and the beginnings of part 5 are written

This is an excellent story. I was privileged to read an advance copy of this chapter, and the next chapter. ( Yes Clarissa72 there are more chapters coming) This is well worth your time.

The author does a great job describing the perspective of a newly enslaved virgin in the legal slavery universe. I look forward to following Rocio's story as she learns how she will server her new Master.

A very well-told story. I'll be happy to enjoy reading the rest.

Interesting start to the story. I’m looking forward to reading more.

Love the spin you have for this story. So far so good with great storytelling and a great new characters. Cheers

Such a great story love to have Avicia of bought or rescue fame back

Damn... till I read the judicial punishment lotery story by gortmundy I enjoyed this universe.

Since reading the story I absolutely HATE it with a passion due to its inherent cruelty. I´m sure you created a great story as always. But I´m abandoning the whole universe. I can´t stomach it anymore.