All Comments on 'Virgin’s Ass Used and Abused'

Well, a really hot beginning to hopefully more chapters. Next time, after cumming in her ass maybe have them pee inside to help clean her out?

There is a special place in hell for rapist. Every pain they inflict is theirs for eternity. Well written though.

Interesting story.

The sex scenes in this story is almost word for word the same as another non-con story called mall sodomy

@Anonymous Yes, I adapt from different fics. Since I am not making money, and they are not copyrighted, I hope it is not too much of an issue

Wow, sounds like a 14 yo boy wrote this, shitter, shithole etc., that doesn't understand basic human anatomy.

A cock alone cannot "pried open my virgin ass". What was described would not only hurt or potentially damage the cock, without some lube nor a finger to get it started, this is not how anal sex happens.

The story has potential, not a bad writer, just get your sex scenes with some realism.

Is she 25 or 27? Considering the story is not even a full page I would think we could expect some continuity.

Also, ripping off other writers is a shitty thing. Boo. 1 star.

https://www.literotica.com/s/mall-sodomy

Mall sodomy is the original story that was stolen by this author.

Agree too much rude words to describe her butt. There should have been more details about her pain and fear. Ending is rushed

Make your own story next time. Except minor changes. This literally the same story as the one in the mall. Practically the same words.

You don't adapt from different fics, you steal from different fics. Why would I want to bother reading your story when the superior original is available?