All Comments on 'Virtual Reality: Pokemon D/P Ch. 7'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
WHENS THE NEXT ONE!

Fantastic, refer to last part of the series again. Same comment effectively. You should post in the comments the release date of the next one or about how long it will be, do you knoe?

LSG16LSG16almost 12 years ago
Made me make an account.

I have read my a story on this site and have lamented that many beautiful gems of stories often die out. Seeing that this one was started up again, made me rejoice heartily! Please continue the story, perhaps in a true double battle or perhaps introducing pokemon into the mix, not necessarily as participants (although that would be fun), due to hentai I can imagine bulbasaur being impromptu bondage gear.

Prince0DragonPrince0Dragonalmost 11 years ago
Virtual Reality: Pokemon D/P

Are you alive?

jpz007ahrenjpz007ahrenalmost 11 years ago
Epic Series

Only complaint is I hate how much I want to play the games again! All the sex was wonderful in each chapter and the story had a great arch. I was somewhat upset by this end, but only because I didn't want the chain to end. As you said, the game never really ends, but with it stopping here, the reader is free to imagine whatever they wish. xD

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Please continue the chain

Please continue the story. I really enjoyed it and I want to at least see what happens when lynx faces the final 4.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Please continue

Please finish this story off, it's too good to just leave the plot hanging like this

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