All Comments on 'Virtuous Thief Ch. 01'

That's fucking bullshit. Why would he lose all the access and privileges of being part of the cloister while also having to remain in vow of chastity? That's dosent make sense and ther explanation was weak and half assed how are they going to enforce it? They got him a position but that dosent mean he has to accept. All he needs to do is just leave. Really dumb and not well thought out at all. Barely any world building or characterization just thrown together with no substance.

Fine work; don't take the other comment too hard, I get you're just setting up your story right now and believe me the criticism he gave was far kinder than whatever i got lmao but in future it's usually better to do more than just a set up in a chapter, perhaps more of his world outside the ecclesiarchy or at the least an introduction to his soon to be futa partner/s anyways keep it up, interesting concept and I'm a fan of chastity male dominated by futa lol