All Comments on 'Vision of the Spirit Ch. 10'

by wilderness

Sort by:
  • 2 Comments
peteinchicagopeteinchicagoabout 14 years ago
Not Bad

still a whore, I wonder when Tom's going to find out what she's up to. Soon I hope, he needs to kick her lying whore ass out.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Completely at odds. Turning me off the story. The Cheif now evil? His wife a blackmailer. Turning a great story to trash.

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous