All Comments on 'Visions Unveiled Ch. 00'

You totally rock! You have true literary prowess!

Your writing is strong and you've definitely got my interest.

Please post quickly. Like, at least once a month. Please?

What a fabulous start!! The baby is obviously his mate, which ties into the vision, and this is very intriguing. Can't wait for more and to see where it goes :)

Great start...you have me ready for another chapter!

Aweskme. Great beginning and I love the way this has played out. Can't wait to read more

I like it alot :)

Update fast.... Please :P

Do get an editor. There are a lot of volunteer editors to choose from. Choose one who will proofread your story and edit it for grammar.

Only first chapter, and I am already looking forward to the story's progress. Also, your writing is well done, and everyone can always find areas to improve.

very cool first chapter cant wait for more

Can't wait to read more.

Hope for more soon!!