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by Irish Moss

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gravyruggravyrugover 11 years ago
The sex was good

but there wasn't anything else to the story. No real buildup, and no reason to care about the characters. This would be an excellent middle to a story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

Try to vary your word choices. Was kind of repetitive to keep seeing "tool" and "titties"

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Good!

I agree about some repetitive words but I REALLY enjoyed this story!

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I've always had a vivid imagination and fantasizing about the women who have passed through my life goes back as long as I can remember. Upon discovering online erotica, I started to think that maybe I should go ahead and write down some of these fantasies and submit them to ...