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The tenses were all over the place: past to present and back again. It made for very irritating reading that spoiled the story for me.

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And what are we to think about the wife being acutely aware of the aroma? Is she okay with that? That adds a whole other element to your story, maybe even a more interesting one.

Your stories are different and interesting. They would be much more erotic if you did a better job editing or had someone else edit your stories.