All Comments on 'Visiting My Soon-to-be Step-Brother'

Damn! Nice work with the dialogue. It's very erotic!

Great start-love the characters and your writing. Looking forward to chapter two!

Hot as, we need more!

Zach is a sexy 21 year old! He has hair on his abs, and along his ass crack. I assume a hairy chest as well? That's a sexy sight! Let his soon-to-be-step-brother touch his cock, and maybe they can get something going between them. Maybe a good kissing session, followed by blow jobs! I can imagine the step brother caressing and licking Zack's sexy hairy chest!

First story? Really good, impeccable writing! Five Stars and a Follow from me.

nice read... more please...

Good start for a brother romance. Hope there are more chapters to cum.

Really well written, good descriptions, and great lead up to a next chapter. Can't wait to see where this is heading. I always wanted an older brother growing up, to do things with. Hate to date myself, but I used to fantasize about sharing a bedroom with Wally Cleaver. Looking forward to more and thanks. MLF

A quickee or a begin of bromantic relationship?

I'm waiting for Zach to make a connection with his soon-to-be step-brother. Give Zach a splash of sexy chest hair -- he is already a very sexy young man!

I really liked this story. It was hot and heart-warming at the same time.

Zach just has real sex oozing from every pore on his manly body. And flaunting his naked self could be a real invitation to his step brother. Let them get it on together -- just the two of them. That would be a great way for them to get acquainted and let them "Cum" to know each other! Ha!

Great story arc at this point. So much fun potential with interesting and relatable characters. I'm enjoying it!

Nice story I like it