All Comments on 'Visiting Sis Ch. 01'

cant wait for more

If you want to skip the long circuitous journey, and come quickly to the destination/culmination, just read enough until you've got a feel for the situation and the characters, and then

Skip to chapter 12 --which is where the the bestie parts begin,

and then, read through to the end.

By the time I got to Ch. 04, it had become so tedious that I skipped to Ch. 11, without feeling I lost the plot.

On the other hand, if you are enjoying the journey so much that progress to the destination does not matter....well, you are different from me.

A very well written,

but quite verbose (wordy) story.

A story with a wonderful plot line,

that takes too long to get there.

Paul in Oklahoma