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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Good premise.

But the sex was meh. It happened too fast. Too abruptly. It was over too quickly.

Some dialog might have helped. Relling Keisha to watch the way she teased his cock, for exmple. Notice how he reacts when I.... Watch what she does when I... Should I blow him or have him titty fuck me? Show us how you're playing with yourself. Are you close yet? Should I finger his/her ass?

Had real potential. Didn't deliver.

Three stars.

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