All Comments on 'Vitamin G Ch. 02'

A lot of your word choices are distractingly incorrect in the context in which you've chosen to use them. There were so many unfortunate instances where I was taken out of the story thinking that word does not mean what the aothor thinks it means. The story is decent nonetheless, but developing your vocabulary would really improve your work.

A second helping of sister and Rachel please

It's been a while but hoping there is more chapters. How did the follow up go with his sister. Aftermath to Rachel's lovely evening. Other conquests, mom, aunt, ex. Plus him and his best bud team up.

Excellent. We need more of our man's adventures.

really disturbed at a comment on here asking for help to 'achieve this fantasy'. Mods, have you flagged this? this is a rape story. should remain fantasy only.

Wow I came so hard multiple times. My pussy is very wet. Good job

just love this drugged incest, rape story. would have been fun if had done his mom too, would have been another great chapter..

Where can I get some vitamin G to take and then go for a walk maybe?