All Comments on 'Voices in My Head Ch. 01'

What grade are you in? Because I can't imagine an adult writing this.

I'm assuming you weren't listening to the voices in your head that told you to not to publish this.

God damn that was hot. Really enjoyed the fact that the son wasn't a jerk. Sure he could hear her thoughts but he didn't have to pay attention to them. He obviously loves his mom.

Please continue!

Lol...

sorry I can not refund your time...

OUT-FUCKING-STANDING!! Love it can't wait for part 2! Ignore rutherford366 and anonymous obviously struck a chord they don't like!

Lol... sorry I can not give you a refund on your time... hopefully you have learned from this and will not do so in the future... luckily no one has a gun to your head and you can move right along...

Loved it…more chapters! 5 ⭐️’s Very entertaining

Marvin

I like the story. It's a bit hurried, could be developed more, but I like the concept. I'll read the rest of the series as well. Don't worry about the naysayers, do what your heart and head tell you to do.

shit....some serious mental issues going on here

Don’t worry about these meathead comments, good story. I’ll read the next, just like they will.

good story, I would appreciate if you could put more specific tags to your stories

Develop the story a bit, it doesn't need much. Also I commend you for not falling into the "I can read minds so now I will just bang and leave" trap.

Clever concept - hot & erotic. Well done.

I kinda like it. I wonder, however, whether the manly paragon has his path too well paved before him. The device is . . . unsporting but it does give you opportunity to examine the internal conflicts that gives a relatively trite encounter a distinctive savor,

I dont think you need to sweat criticism; you must know already that you can write.

Really hope Jackson doesn't get to do anything with Janice

Read on McDuff... fear not, Jackson and Janice do not get together in what is, to this point in print.