All Comments on 'Volondil and Erelen'

Erelen you have a *really* good hand at writing, the story drew me in. The setting, the characters and the plot as well as the erotic part were very well done. This story could stand at any fantasy magazine (well probably minus the erotic part). I’d really like to see more of this world, if you’re in the mood to write some more.

I agree, your world is pretty fantastic. I could tell you have your heart in this character. Keep up the good work!

More more!!

*bangs metal cups on the table*

You have to write it!!! We want to know what is going to happen to these too gorgeous characters. sequel, sequel , screamingforasequel............

They have all said what I am thinking!! please continue!!

i liked the story but its a bit familiear as in loads of idea stealing

I love fantasy type stories. This is great. I like how you don't just rush into the sex. There is a little story and seduction before everything starts going.

and i dont get what the guy with the idea stealing is referring to. as far as fantasy genre goes this is more original than most.

somtimes I find myself wanting the bad guy to win and get the girl. I loved this story. I would love to read more.

I hope to read more chapters. But I get the feeling since you wrote the story in 2006 and its 2009 that we won't see any more. To bad.

you've read (or watched) lord of the rings. a few lines are taken straight from the movie adaption. no shame in today's writers. you need to put in a disclaimer.

Interesting tale. Strong.

Haha yeah it's 2015 and it sadness me that we can't get more of this