All Comments on 'Voluntary Beauty'

by Farleven

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ThomasTheSkepticThomasTheSkepticabout 3 years ago

One of the best stories on here. Original and well thought out. Can I give it 6 stars?

blueyes4ublueyes4uabout 3 years ago

well written,original story,n sexy.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

BRAVO!!

TorbjornsonTorbjornsonabout 3 years ago

I really enjoyed how you covered both sides. Great story!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

That was an incredible read and I think it was one of the most perfectly descriptive stories I have ever read. I truly love emotional stories and this one was spectacular. Thank you for allowing me the honor or enjoying it.

J.D.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

very nice story,hope you'll continue it , it deserves 6 stars

MissLouisecdMissLouisecdabout 3 years ago

loved this story , id love to have those nanites transform me like that

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Legitimately thought provoking and inventive. Not the usual sci-fi spin, and that’s impressive!

matthewamatthewaabout 3 years ago

An excellent story. The characters are all charming and well fleshed out. Renton's motivations and Rosalie's reactions seem heartfelt and genuine. Marigold and Mr. Pearson are sweet and understanding. You've left it open for more stories in this universe. It will be interesting to see if it goes further.

spikymc61spikymc61about 3 years ago

Wow i wish a company was real that was so sexy

nikkicd_tvnikkicd_tvabout 3 years ago

Oh, how I wish a place like this existed! I would sign up in a heartbeat!

What a great story and a treat to read in how the trans-sexual theme was handled. Very creative, and immersive, as well! Kudos to the Author!

MissEllie69MissEllie69almost 3 years ago

If only it was this easy to change sex

ZZchromosomeZZchromosomealmost 3 years ago

Very good. Very well-written and I really liked the way the Company went out of its way to ensure that the girls' legal situation and emotional well-being were appropriately handled.

Too many of these types of stories ignore these aspects. In order for a girl to feel sexy, she needs to first feel safe. So well done. If you write more of these, I will read them.

rhody50rhody50almost 3 years ago

Loved it, absolutely loved it, what a concept.

DPI617DPI617almost 3 years ago

When is the next instalment.......

MiyataMiyataalmost 3 years ago

I loved it.

Now, only if it could actually happen in real life.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

We need more from this story!!!!!

robin48robin48over 2 years ago

Good to be a girl.MMMMMMMMMM

SilkeeSmoothSilkeeSmoothover 2 years ago

This is an amazing story, easily one of the best I've ever read.. Just one question for you: What's the address for Voluntary Beauty? :)

SabrinaGLangtonSabrinaGLangtonalmost 2 years ago

Wonderful, love it. Thanks for sharing...

JamietalltxCzdJamietalltxCzdover 1 year ago

Such a great sort! Thank you so much! Would love to see more of Rosalie! Oh if those nanotechnology stories were true!!!

Patricia169Patricia169over 1 year ago

dat verhaal wind me op, ik wil héél graag Rosalie, worden wie helpt ?

Patricia169Patricia169over 1 year ago

Wie maakt er me als Rosalie ? Super goed verhaal !

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

I love coming back to this incredibly emotional and fulfilling story. The experiences that are discussed and lived are so well thought out and written that I am envious of Marigold and Rosalie and only wish this was an actual possibility. It would make life so much more exciting. Thank you for lifting my spirits once again.

RachelPrRachelPrabout 1 year ago

Ooooh! Girl, sign me up!!! I would love this! Can't wait for more if Rosalie's adventures. Thank you.💞

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Very well written.

dragonlover1dragonlover15 months ago

a very interesting premise and a good read

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I've been wring for a long time and got into writing Erotica after college. I enjoy exploring many themes, often involving transformations of the mind and body. It's fun to explore the change of perspective that can come with sudden new cravings, whether from programming or ...