You've captured the perspective and experience of your subject really well. This story is hot. I hope you experiment with including ponygirls in your other Star Wars stories.
Hi all! I hope that everyone likes my stories, votes them all a 5 and leaves me lots of feedback. - ahandcuffgirl(at)yahoo(dot)com L1ter0t1ca has removed my email from all of my stories, because they are assholes.