All Comments on 'VooDoo Barbie'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
pretty good

little more detail; and maybe alittle longer chapter. thanks for writting .

RedJohnnyRedJohnnyover 17 years ago
Interesting Concept

Very interesting concept. I'd love to see this developed some more and see how he begins to use his power. Look forward to reading the next (hopefully longer) chapter.

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