All Comments on 'Vox Dominus Pt. 13'

My heart sank when I only saw 2 pages haha

Please keep it up, great job!

Been waiting for a new chapter! Excellent as always, but a bit of a tease! Now just can’t wait for the next and to see when it will all come together :D

So much of the story consists of each character’s self reflection. It seems like you’re stalling do to lack of direction. You’re writing is very good but content/ production time is really dragging this down

Your writing is fantastic. I can't get enough. Your leave me infinitely satisfied and infinitely hungry for more each time. Bless you and your work

Too little happened in this story to warrant a 5 star. And the story overall is too good for me to want to give any part of it a mere 4 star.

A nice, slow burn is nice (as proven by FortySixtyFour's "AnimeCon Harem"), but it's high time for some real payoff. Preferably in a longer chapter... even if that means it takes longer to be released.

Keep up the good work. Here's to hoping Seb finds a way to satisfy his dark side (along with his slave[s]) without giving up on his morality!

you have the makings of a great story. Though you repeat yourself many times and do not go forward as much as I would like, a country way of saying you ramble on and don't get to far. If you ever complete this story you may want to do a rewrite and bring it along a little faster don't repeat so much plenty of material to use to make this story even better. I do applaud you for putting your work out there for everyone to read. waiting for the next chapters thank you

I love these characters, the chapters are too short, gahhh!

Wow she's betraying her BF! Interesting! As far as the recording, all he has to do is command her to LISTEN. She'll have to listen to the complete recording.

Veronica is a fucking Dyke and wants Chelsea for herself

this whole story, is driven by unfounded assumptions.. the entire plot gets unraveled, by the characters just having a frank discussion where they clear the air..

On and on it drags in bite-sized chapters of boring emptiness. I await patiently for something to happen that is inline with the promise of the description - since chapter 1!

13 chapters and Seb/Simp still hasn't fucked ANYONE!!!

Mommy means business.