All Comments on 'Voyage Into Manhood Ch. 01'

I loved it so much. It was sexy, sensual and emotional to read.

I gave it 5 stars. I can't believe people have downrated it like that. I have seen badly written stories rated so high here for no damn reason. Don't let that get to you though and continue writing. I want to see what happens between Alex and Jacob.

Absolutely MUST check into your series set in prison. Compelling!

I can't wait for the next chapter. You write very well.

This is a super compelling story, well written, yet it is underrated. I have read far less motivating stories that received a much higher rating. This story should have at least a 4.90 score, if not more

Please keep up the good work. I too want to see what happens to Alex and Jacob.

I liked the descriptive details

Compelling characters, great writing, suspenseful plot, and nasty villians. Eager to read next chapters. There definitely seems like a genuine connection between Jacob and Alex.

It took me a bit to get into the story, but wow. Now I can’t wait to see the next chapters. Very well written, good characters development, and the story line keeps revealing itself to us. Bravo

Hot story! Love the setup, the plot twists and the descriptive sex woven into the story! Looking forward to more!

Loved the submission, confusion and sex of course. Well written and looking forward to more. Thanks LJ

Fascinating story, which was remarkably well written. This story was much more than just arousing—which it most certainly was. It almost felt like a sermon, in the best possible way! By that I mean I was taken on a journey that transformed my thinking and ultimately my heart.

Most of us grew up in a culture which taught us who we were was unacceptable, and for many of us, religion played a key role in cultivating that self loathing. In this story we see the variety of sexual expressions that are results of that level of repression.

That's the fascinating part of this series. The author does not condemn the sexual acts or fantasies of any of the characters, and some of them are kinky as hell. It is the duplicity that is being criticized here. So if you get off on power-play, humiliation, Daddy-boy, or heartwarming romance, I highly recommend this professionally written series.

Well written and theologically correct in many christian denominations doctrine so the author has “done his homework.” Ezekiel and Brad’s behavior are astonishing in this ministry, so it’s also great that Alex is confirming those leader’s duplicity. The main character’s thoughts and prayers are so spot on as a child and adolescent…sadly he didn’t have or feel comfortable seeking help/comfort/even advice on another denomination that has a broader theological interpretation of sexual desires. Again this is often but not always the case.

I have never read one of your stories. Great star to a series!!! This had me hard the whole time. I wish someone would use me like that. I would love to have the cum up my ass!! Please keep writing and don’t listen to the nay sayers!!