All Comments on 'Voyage of the Istanbul Tigress Ch. 01'

I read your "prequel" (for want of a better word) of the situation in Tunis and enjoyed that. When I saw you had continued the story, I was excited. You have a deft hand at describing battle, yet at the same time interspersing it with sex and obsession. I hope you continue the story as I want to know what happens to Hamiliton and whether or not he ever sees his Nasira again!

needs more sexual scenes. There were only 2 in 3 pages. I think at least 4 would have been better. : )

Some absolutely beautiful writing.