All Comments on 'Voyeur Ch. 08'

I've never met anyone as calculatingly sociopathic as Ray. I've met murderous psychopaths before, but they were nothing like Ray.

I swear each chapter just gets better and better! I love this!

I don't even know where to begin, but all I know is that this story is so gripping!

I feel bad for Rachel and Ben, I don't even know how they'll move forward from this, if they even reach that point.

I hate Ray so much, him being so articulate, calculating, and meticulous just proves how dangerous and sociopathic he is, but see, the downside of that is he's too cocksure of himself, couldn't see himself failing and maybe that's what Brian and Ben needs to get him by using Marcus as bait, with the pretense of Ray thinking that he's doing it to help Ben to lighten Rachel up, but in fact, he's setting himself for his own failure. Well, this is just wishful thinking on my end.

Hope we'll finally see some rainbow after this shit-storm.

The wait is agonizing but damn well worth it.

How many more chapters are left? Need to prepare myself.

Thank you for this story, and this gripping update.

Kudos!

This is definitely a spellbinding story, please write more.......

As I've said before, your best work yet! Please continue, this is amazing!

We certainly have a complete picture of Ray at this point. At the same time I am surprised how completely rattled Ben is. He is if anything a liability to Brian and Ahmed. When he an Ray meet Ben better have is self control back because blind, thoughtless, aggression will be a real weakness given the deadly skills Ray has developed.

I eagerly look forward to your next installment. Please hurry!

Feel so bad for rachel, reading this chapter was like a punch in the stomach. Maybe next chapter she somehow gets in contact with Ben? Though i dont how that would happen since ray is so unbelieveably conniving and doesn't ever let his guard down. I really hope those tapes never get out , please let rachel get a chance to destroy them!

but i want a happy ending for Rachel, so im still reading.

I am in awe of how you can combine hot sex with nonconsent, develop so many different characters in such believable ways, and yet pay no sacrifice on the erotic component. I guess it will all come down to how forgiving Ben is, knowing that Rachel did what she felt she had to do to stay alive for him, and for herself. It's amazing how all men find Rachel irresistible, and yet, the way you write it, it's convincing as well. Well done! -- JB

Amazing, I'm so conflicted, the mark of a great storyteller! Keep writing, I'm dying for more!

Am a kinda messed up for sympathizing with Ray?

I have read this chapter over and over again and I love it. I'd love at least one more erotic scene with them before we get to the whole "saving rachel" scene. This was so good and I wish it could go on longer. Thank you for keeping non-con non-con bc honestly if I wanted something specifically romantic I would read Romance, not the Nonconsent/Reluctance genre.

<3 from Chi-town

Thanks for all the great feedback :) I would guess (but can't guarantee) that there are approx two chapters left for this story. It comes down to what my mind provides.

I will say two things - Rachel sympathisers may like to skip the next instalment, but also remember I have a preference for HEAs.

I love all your comments, thanks again. JB, I am always wowed to get praise from a powerhouse author such as yourself. Anonimoo I am always laughing that you freak out every chapter. I'm glad you are enjoying it ;)

Bravo! The turn of events is great. The "stupid solo" Marcus was funny. Ben and Ray are seemingly comparable contenders now. Great stuff! I'm submitting comments on almost every chapter haha! Dear Author, you've written a very interesting storyline.

I gotta say, even though the audience knew it was gonna be Marcus, that build up was hilarious. "What human being on this planet could ever be so stupid..."

😂I loved it!